Thursday, September 18, 2014

September 18th

In reading chapter 4 of A Field Guide for Science Writers, I had a few thoughts. My first one was that if we are using an AB/BC format for writing, whether it is in sentence form, paragraph form, or story form, aren't we cheating? I feel as if having a format in any type of writing is highly restrictive and disrespectful to writers as a whole. I want my reader to be able to understand what I'm writing about not because I repeat the last word or phrase of one sentence at the beginning of the text, but because I know what I am talking about to the point that I am able to tell it as a story rather than a list of factoids. This moves me nicely on to the next thought I had while reading this chapter. I love the idea of writing difficult and complex topics as if they are a story. People understand stories, they are part of the foundation of our civilization, so why not write one. Instead of focusing on being able to put my story in an "easy" format for a reader to understand, I think I will focus on becoming a good story-teller of all stories.

Carl Sagan opens up "The Demon-Haunted World" with "[Science] is more than a body of knowledge; it is a way of thinking." This, to me, tells me that if we tell science stories like we tell other stories, as writers, we won't have to try so hard to write for the lay-men. When we plug our science writings into an understandable format, we push it into a body of knowledge. When we tell it as a story, we relate to the general population's way of thinking.

Lewis Wolpert claims that "science often explains the familiar in terms of the unfamiliar." When we witness a apple falling out of a tree, we aren't surprised or perplexed. Most likely, we ignore the action and move along with our day. For a scientist, they see that apple fall, and they see gravity and aerodynamics and friction. The scientist assigns numbers and velocities and directions of acceleration specific to that apple. Everyone sees science every day, but how we interpret that science and how we describe that science sets the scientist apart from the writer. The scientist will explain what happens in nature with an intended audience of other scientists. The writer needs to interpret that information and reformat it for their audience of humanity. For the lay-man. For the non-scientist. In this way, stories make the most sense. As a writer, I am uncomfortable doing science writing in a format that some scientist, at some point in time, created so that the average citizen could understand what happening in nature. I refuse to belittle my writing to a formula. I would much rather tell a story about why the apple fell from the tree and how the forces that took place on the apple made it turn and tousle between the tree and the ground.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Cicily! I don't know that the authors of the field guide were trying to belittle your writing to a formula but rather show how a thread of connections to basic ideas throughout your story will make it effective for more lay-readers. I agree with you and will often just write the story as it unfolds for me without giving much thought to the A to D connections, but when I'm in the editing process I think that format will help me to make the concepts clearer. This by no means a restrictive template (which I also hate) but rather but merely a useful tool if it fits in. I think the point is to not assume that every reader will understand (as they probably should) why gravity causes the apple to fall in your story without you first giving them a primer on gravity. Also, thank you for referencing this part of the reading because it forced me to look closer at it and I was sort of ignoring it until now.

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  2. Cicily,
    I agree with what you've said about the given formula(AB/BC) acting in a way that is restrictive for writers. I think it is equally restrictive for readers alike. Writers shouldn't be prescribed or even suggested a formula for successful science writing, it should come as a product of hard work, research and practice. By subjecting ourselves for AB/BC formatting, were removing the creative and rhetorical elements, as well as the general idea of composition. Additionally, I feel this formula can take away from a readers interpretation. If every piece of science writing was formatted according to AB/BC, there wouldn't be any draw for the reader. Variety is what makes the world go round.

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